Welcome back to the addictive fun of Friday Fictioneers! You know the best fiction can be found right here. Led by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields, we take the photo and weave our magic with prose and poetry to entertain you. Dawn Landau has the honor of providing the visual prompt for us this week. All around the world writers eagerly await their weekly tonic.Rochelle is the source of the photo for inspiration this week.
copyright -Dawn Q. Landau
(Genre:Fiction) (100 words)
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“You told me you would buy me a beachfront villa for retirement,” Alice whined.
“So I did, and so I have!” Luther answered.
“This is no villa!”
“What are you a walking dictionary now?”
“You think we can live in this?”
“Our first place was worse than this,” Luther argued.
“I cannot believe you spent actual money for this.”
“You’re never satisfied,” Luther replied.
“Who would be satisfied with this?”
“Harrison Ford loved it,” Luther answered.
“You bought this from him?”
“Yep.”
But I expected more.”
“Wait are you looking at the cabana?”
“What?”
“Step to your right.”
“OH MY!”
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Joe's Musings 
Nice twist to this, I’m still smiling imagining the scene. Well done Joe
Haha, thank goodness (for all involved!)
Ha, yes that looks like a great cabana.. Sounds like he had broken expectations before.
Hm, not very bright of her, huh? haha! I can just imagine what she saw when she stepped to the right.
Well done – I enjoyed it a lot. Step to the right was a perfect ending. Thank you! Nan
Hi Joe,
Very nice use of miscommunication to create a fantastic conclusion. Ron