Write A Fiction Short Story With Me

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The fifth chapter of the Baker’s Dozen Fiction Story is here! This chapter will remain on this static page until May 26th, then chapter 6 from E. J. Lamprey will premiere in this space. Please read and comment so we can know how you like the story.

Chapter 1 – by Joe Owens

Chapter 2 – by Josh Magill. You can visit Josh’s blog at The Magill Review

Chapter 3 - by Ambrozya. You can visit Ambrozya at her blog Ambrozya

Chapter 4 written by Leslie Moon. Be sure to visit her at Moondust Writer

This is Chapter 5, written by Candice Setton. Visit her at her blog: Setton Crew

Ross, in his best efforts, ensures Angie and Forrest that he can lead them to safety, blindly and for the moment, they trust him as it seems they have no other option or way out of this war around them. They cross over into a large warehouse three blocks down from their office. They have walked past this warehouse many times and neither of them, at this moment, remember giving it much more attention than that.

“What is this place?” they wonder.

There is a silence and peace that feels strange considering the chaos that is going on around them. They are overcome by the peace and stand side by side, Angie and Forrest, holding hands and breathing deeply. Suddenly, as though they were lost in another world, they realise their closeness and Forrest looks into Angie’s beautiful eyes as if to say, “I don’t know how, but we will get out of this alive and together.” They sigh, in unison, and it just feels so right, the two of them together.

It is at that moment that Forrest’s cell phone buzzes rather loudly in his pocket. It is like they, the people who caused this, are still watching and each moment he gets to drink Angie in, they break him away from it. Yet another cryptic message, this one a little clearer than the previous one. It simply reads, “YOU MUST TRUST NO ONE EXCEPT THE GIRL!” As he ponders on this message and wonders what Ross is doing, who he really works for and where he is leading them to, he grabs Angie and begins to run, and run, and run. Angie, who trusts him totally, accepts the running without question. She knows what her own father is capable of and is relieved that Forrest has been warned without her having to say anything. Although she does wonder who the message came from. Right now there is no time to give it much thought.

After what felt like hours of running they finally come to a place where they can stop, for a brief moment, and gather their thoughts. Neither one of them would ever have imagined that they were this connected. While they were both secretly drawn to each other, this seems a little unreal right now but they both know that they need to get out of whatever they are in before they can actually discuss anything, and they are both strangely ok with that. They embrace the journey and look forward to the end when they can, hopefully, have a quiet night in and discuss life. It is at that moment that they both feel that they are in this together, forever.

Suddenly, Forrest gets a flash back to sitting at the traffic light and being stopped every single morning. He knows now that there probably were cameras all along and that they, whoever they are, stopped him every single day to observe him. Who were these people? And what on earth was the true meaning behind the bent piece of metal around his neck? Since his father gave it to him he has never taken it off. He tries then to remove it, but he cannot.

Angie notices that he is lost deep in thought and slowly touches his arm. The touch of her skin to his brings him back to the present and he is really grateful to have her at his side. She looks at him and says exactly what he just thought and together they get lost in another world for a brief moment in time.

They are immediately snapped back to reality by the buzzing of Forrest’s phone. Another message, it reads, “HELP IS ON THE WAY.” As they read it together, they hear a chopper up ahead. They have no idea where to run to but they both know that they have to get out of there. They look up at the chopper and it is clearly marked with the ‘Mossad’ marking – they are here to help Forrest and Angie. After Ross had given a brief background of Dawid’s history, and after the message that they just read, they know that this is help and they can trust these people.

A sudden feeling of relief engulfs them as they reach for the ladder that has been lowered and they are lifted into the safety of the chopper. Once inside and seated they are given some much needed water and promised a place to clean up and eat – much to their relief. They both sink into the leather seats and fall into a deep sleep, overcome by the exhaustion, side by side.

The soldiers watch as they sleep. They take Forrest’s phone and search it for any clues that they might need. They know exactly who these two are and wonder if they are at all aware of what is happening around them. The soldiers search Forrest and Angie for identity just to reassure themselves that they have the right people. Neither of them awake as they are searched, as though they have been drugged, they are both in such a deep sleep, wrapped in each other’s warmth.

They are awoken by the quiet that follows once the chopper has landed. They realise that neither of them have any clue as to where they are yet they just know that these people have the answers that they need…or do they?

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The list of contributors and their blogs:

Joe Owens – Joe’s Musings                                                May 1st

Josh Magill – The Magill Review                                     May 6th

Ambrozya – Ambrozya                                                      May 11th

Moondust Writer - Moondust Writer                           May 16th

setton crew – setton crew                                                  May 21st

E.J. Lamprey - elegsabiff                                                   May 26th

Jennifer Pendergast - Elmo Writes                               May 31st

Cl Elli – Venti Mocha Moments                                      June 5th

Ted Strutz – TedBook                                                         June 10th

Lashell Collins - Lashell Collins                                   June 15th

Francesca - Dr. Franny and Mrs. Myself                  June 20th

David Stewart - The Green-Walled Tower                 June 25th

Joe Owens - Joe’s Musings                                              June 30th

63 thoughts on “Write A Fiction Short Story With Me

  1. If there is still room I’d love to join! Which genre it will be? And just to let you know I write in English but I’m Italian native. I like the idea but I don’t want to spoil the fun for everybody!

  2. This is a fantastic idea, Joe! I wish I could guarantee I had the time to go with you on this journey. If you do another one in the winter months (for Canada) I would love to come on board. I am going to follow this quest for sure!

  3. Oh, my gosh. This sounds like so much fun! It also sounds really scary since I have no idea what genre you’ll be writing. But I’m in. And coming off the A to Z Challenge, I must also be really crazy, and a total glutton for punishment! lashellcollins.wordpress.com

  4. Pingback: A Collaborative Fiction Story | Joe's Musings

  5. This is a great idea and it’s off to a great start. Thanks again for inviting me to do this. I see I’m right at the end; ah, the pressure of giving it the perfect ending. I’ll do my best. :)

  6. Okay, racking up the pressure! I’m creating a mini timetable of events to refer to for my turn, and two chapters in, it is already WOW. No pressure. Glad I’m not David, with the ending to do :)

  7. Well folks we have our second chapter and I must say i LOVE it. I am not sure what I would have written for the second chapter, so I am glad someone else got the chance. I think this is a great continuation and I cannot wait for May 11th and the next chapter!

    • You made an interesting first chapter that I really had to think on. And with only a week to do it, I found it a great and fun challenge. Interested to see where it goes.

    • Ahhh! Yep pressure is on! Can I switch place with someone else? (Just kidding!)
      Neurones are firing fast, my brain is feeling the heat…! See you all in a few days…
      With great respect! A.

  8. I think Forrest may be more of a hero-take-charge-kind-of-a-guy than he think. Joe, you started the story off with a bang (no pun intended0 with a thrilling first chapter. I liked the mystery of the computer message and the characters you created. The adventure continues with Josh fleshing out our boy Forrest and putting them into a heap of trouble. Good job both of you… can’t wait to see where this goes by the time it gets to Chapter 9!

  9. Sorry all I finally just made a post for Chapter 1 so it the link will work. I did not think about the static page not having a specific link to chapter 1, but now there is one. I know five days is not long, but this is the kind of story you want to keep on with. I am looking forward to Ambrozya’s addition on Saturday.

  10. Okay you smart readers and writers, explain this: I edit the story above, placing all the spaces between dialogue and paragraphs. I can see it looking right in edit mode. I update, which should save in this form and then I come back here and it looks like nothing was ever done.

    • Mmmm no clue… did you edit in text mode with the html code and stuff? It happened to me a few times. I don’t remember what I did actually to make it work. Sometimes I edit in Word (!!) and then copy paste,somehow it keeps the spaces.

  11. Thanks to Joe, Josh and Ambroyza for a great beginning to this intense story. Who or what will blow up next??
    I wrote a blog today about inspiration and linked over here from my blog

    Hope Forrest gets out in one piece…

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