Trifextra – Week One Hundred- Those Eyes

On now to this week’s Trifextra challenge.  This week we are asking you to count syllables.  And words.  It’s a lot of math for those of us who might be more accustomed to dealing with words, but we’re confident you can pull it off.

We are asking for a 33-word response to the following snippet:

The first time I saw. . .

Here’s the catch: all of your 33 words must be one syllable each.  We’re going low-brow on your this week.  Or not.  Can you class it up under these restrictions?  Give us your best.

To clarify, we are giving you 5 words.  We want another 33 from you, for a grand total of 38. – See more at: http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/#sthash.B4Q0KFRU.dpuf – See more at: http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/#sthash.QM8mVJZq.dpuf

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 The first time I saw her my heart stopped and knees went weak. Her blue eyes were so clear, they pierced my soul. Her red lips were all I could dream of when my eyes closed each night.

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I want to point you flash fiction writers to another option. It is Flash in the Pan, where you write short fiction 50-150 words respectively to words chosen and posted each week. 250 responses will be collected and published by Redmund Productions. You can check the details at the following link: Flash in the Pan.