Hey Dolphin, You’re Blocking My View! – Friday Fictioneers – 20 December

Welcome back to the addictive fun of Friday Fictioneers! You know the best fiction can be found right here. Led by  Rochelle Wisoff-Fields, we take the photo and weave our magic with prose and poetry to entertain you. All around the world writers eagerly await their weekly tonic. Jean L Hays is the source of the photo for inspiration this week.

copyright – Jean L. Hays

(Genre:Fiction) (99 words)

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Hugh stood staring at the new artwork. It was to commemorate Julie’s latest adventure with the girls, where she swam with dolphins. Always some token to remember her trips. But it blocked his favorite view, of the twenty year old McAllister twins cavorting in the pool. Julie had no clue, never did. She hung these things in any open space.  

Julie sat thinking about her marriage. Twenty years past his affair with Cindy McAllister her husband seemed to be making an honest effort. Of course she had no idea what he did while she was away with the girls. 

 

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About Joe Owens

Can you tell from my writing I love God? I hope so because that is what I want you to know most about me. I am also a writer who loves taking on fiction prompts and crafting a story. One day you will read my work in print. Until then enjoy it here! For free!
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13 Responses to Hey Dolphin, You’re Blocking My View! – Friday Fictioneers – 20 December

  1. I’m a little creeped out cause I don’t know if they are his kids or if anyone knows.

  2. Ambiguity is such an awesome tool. I like the twists, and you executed them well. Well done, Joe.

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